Section 2 Global Revisions（第2页）
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2。Checkthatyraphsfollowthesequeopics
&opicesraphsmustfollowthesamesequesofyourthesis。Ifthethesisawillcovera，b，andc，yourtopicesmustappearinthatsamesequence。Jumblingthesequeopicsmakesthepaperhardertoread。Ifyoudoopitheorderpromisedbyyourthesis，youherrewritethethesisorshuffletheparagraphssothatthetwosequech。
Activity2-2:Examihesis
Inthisexercise，youwillfiheleftopicsraphshtn。Discusswithyourpartopicsraphsfollowthesamesequeisihethesis。
3。Checkparagraphtransitions
Ifwepareaoatrain，theindividualparagraphswouldbeseparateboxeabeliooherbymorethansimplesequebytheloontheme，idea，ument。Whenrevisingyourwork，checkthatyraphsaretrulycoupledtogetherratherthansimplysittingsidebyside。
Notonlyceshouldbeachievedbeths，itisalsoimportantwithintheparagraph。Tomakeyt，youmustthinkraphasexpressingasiowhidividualseributebitsofmeaning。Youachievethisliheuseoftransitionalmarkersaences。
Activity2-3:Transitionalmarkers
&hefollole。Ideioeneachexampleahequestionsthatfollow。
Example1
Type-Apersonisforevernervousaboutis—alwayswantifearingfailure。AsanillustrationsiderHhs，thebrilliarepreedadustrywithgoodpotential，butshutitdhtbecausehisautomobileerfect。Suessistypicaloftype-Apeople，whooftehemselvesupforfailurebecausetheirbesteffoodenough。IntrasttotypeAs，typeBsprovidethemselvesoimismaude。TypeBsarethekindofpeoplewhostudyhoursforanexamanddopoorly，yettheystillfeelgoodaboutthemselvesbecausetheydidallthatossible。
Example2
AhainbiographysooerestedinBoswell’sLifeofJohnson。ItstaherbiographiesasShakespearestaherplaywrights:tabovethemall。Formorethauriesithasbeenuouslyinprint，andinthattimeithaswoninnumerableadmirers。Nraphyhasgivensomuchpleasure;nraphyhascreatedsuchavividtralcharacter。Ithasbeeatruismthat，asaresultofBoswell’sextraordinarybook，SamuelJoherknowntousthananyothermaninhistory。
Aswellasbeingafamousandmuchlovedbook，thelifeofJohnsonisaworkthatraisedfualquestionsaboutthenatureofbiographyitself。Isitpossiblefraphertofullyuandwhatitisliketobeanotherhumanbeing?。。。Isbiographysceorart?Historyorfi?
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1。Pleaseuransitionalmarkersineachexample。
2。Whatistheroleofthetransitionalmarker?
3。Therearemaransitionalmarkersbasedesandfuns。Couldyouthinkofmoreexamplestopletethefollo