Section Five Argument（第1页）

SeFiveArgument

Ifyonanysortoftroversialtopic，yaessay。Aessayisoemptstoceyourreaderthatyouropinioandeyourreader'smindaboutaparticularissue。Thetwomodelessaysbelowdiscussthesamesubject:capitalpu。Whilereadingthem，youseehowthewriters'opinionsdifferfromeachother。

ModelEssayOne

ArgumentsagainstCapitalPu

Capitalpu，ordeathpenalty，hasbeehebeginningofhumauhisturythenumberofpeopleexecutedhasbeendeg。Inthe1930s，1，667peoplewereexeparedto717inthe1950s。Since1977，only47peoplehavebeehoughamajorityofAmerisadvocatekeepihpenalty，itshouldnotbeappliedanyloisethiacceptable，sopradfinanbearable。

&reasonwhyweshouldabolishcapitalpuhatitisethiacceptable。“Thoushaltnotkill”isthefifthent（戒律）thatwasgiventousbyGod。Anindividualhasnhttokill，anotherpersonhasdone。OnlyGoddGodshouldbetheoroy。

Thesedreasonweshouldalpuhatithasfailedinitspurpose。Manysupportersofthedeathpenaltyarguethatitisastroopeoplewhocouldbeals。Theyusethetheorythatapersoheamouobegainedfromkillithepainofthepuhepuisgreatenough，theyreason，thepersonwillnotitthecrime。However，thisisafalseargumepeoplewhoesarenotratioime。AstudybyDr。GrisbyoftheUyofFloridashoeralesahahefemaleswhoittedviolentcrimeswereuheinfluenceofalcsandnotratioime。

Thefinalreasonweshoulddoawayuhatitorethaepeoplethinkitischeapertoexecuteaalthanitistosupplyhimorherwithroom，gandfood，buttheyarewrohpenaltyisaveryexpeisistingofthelong，drawn-outprocessofjurysele，exterials，maintenance（生活费用）ofprisohropealsprocess。ItcosttheStateofUtahnearlyamilliondollarstoexecuteGaryGilmore。

Tosumup，capitalpuisbyhebestmethodtodealersonwhohasurder。Sialpuhasnotfunedasected，itshouldbebannedasquicklyaspossible。Wewillfindsoonthatwewouldbebetteroffwithoutthisihanwithit。Meanwhile，morereasonablelawsshouldbeexploredasalteropeheals。

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A“Yes”forCapitalPu

Capitalpuispubydeath，anditisusuallygiventothuiltyofthemostviolentcrimes。However，sialpuhasbeenusedlessfrequentlyiedStatesifewdelyfewvicted（被定罪的）murderershavebeeed。Asace，therehasbeenaterribleinretyears。Thisprovesthatcapitalpushouldbeusedmoreofteredues，showourdeterminationtofightagainstinjustidprotetpeople。

Somepeuethatcapitalpudoeshisisnottrue。Maseriouscrimesbecausetheyknowthatthelawwillnotbeeoheyknowthattheygetagoodlawyertodefeheyplead（以……为由进行辩护）insanity，ortheyfeeltheygetoutofjailearlyeitheronprobatioodbehavior。Ifcapitalpucouldbeenforcedmoreoften，peoplewouldknowthatiftheywerefoundguiltyofseriouscrimessuchasmurder，theywouldbeseh。Althoughthisiswaytotrolallcrimes，itisahodtoeofthemostseriousones。

Othersclaimthatcapitalpuisimmoral，buttheyshouldknowthatmurderandrapearealsoimmoral。Thelawotbetotallymoralwhenalsarenotmoral。AsWalterBernswroteinForCapitalPu:dtheMoralityoftheDeathPenalty，“Therealissueiswhetherjusticepermitsorevehedeathpenalty。Iamawarethatitisaterriblepuhereareterribledterribleals。”Wesimplyotallowalstotakeadvahelaw，butistanduptothemsternly。

&argumentagainstcapitalpuhatitistooexpeheUesspendsmillionsofdollarsonalltypesramsthatdonotalwaysbespeople，sowhyshoulditnotspendmoneycapitalpuisapoteoiohavemurderersandrapistsis。Ifurdererswereexecuted，theywoulddefibeabletokillagain。Thisistheleastthatetoproteot。TheStatesshouldrealizethesigalpua。

In，capitalpuisaerrenttocrime。Ifwedohelifeofthosewhomurdertheirfellowmen，thegeneralpublicwillgetthemessagethatoursocietycareslittleabouthumanlife。Ioensureeveryone'ssafety，pleasevote“yes”forcapitalpu。

'sreadtwumentessayswrittenbytwodifferesoopicbelow。

InNorthAmerieassedthatelimihepulsesothatolderpeoplewishingtouewmaydoso。Doyouthinkashouldalsoadoptasimilarpolicy?

ModelEssayOne

A“Yes”forpulsoryRetirementPolicy

&trieshavediffereretirememostemployeesarerequiredtoretirewhentheyarereagaage。InNorthAmerica，however，aneassedthatelimihepulsesothatanybodywhowishestouewmaydoso。AlthoughthislawmaybeagoodohAmeris，similarlegislationshouldnotbeimplementedinsiderationoflimitedjobopportunities，youngpeople'sdevelopment，andtheforthehealthofoldpeople。

&reasonashouldnotadoptsuchalaulsepolicyhelpstolowertheue。ahasaboutover1。3billioisextremelyhardfoveroprovideeveryermajob。Ifoldpeopledohepeoplemaywahestreets，resultiialsoseeday。

Thesedreasonashouldsuchalaeopleotadvaheircareersifoldpeoplefillthejobsatthetop。Althoughsomeoldpeoplehaverigexperiehekheyhavemaynotsuitthefastdevelopmey。Maeisfiedwithwhattheyhaveachieved，anddonotwanttohavearast，mostyoungpeertogainnewknowledgeandwillingtoapplytheirkheirwork。Ifoldpepeoplewillhavemoreportaheirpostsaertributionstoourtry。

Thefitoenforcesuchalawinaisthatoldpeopleareusuallyih。Opposmayclaimthatsomeoldpeoplearestillewehavetoadmitthenaturalrole；thatis，oldpeopleareicastheyusedtobe，ortheyareigpeopleare。Sotheirworkeffiberatherloweveiowork。Sinceoldpeoplehaveworkedfordecades，theyshouldstaheirretirementlife。Forexample，theytravel，playchess，writeautobiography，etc。。Theyalsohelptolrand。Ahappyfamilyeopletolivelonger。

Inbrief，ifallesepeopleretireatthepulse，people，aireeswillbeherornoteedstogethepresentpulsoryretiremeirelyoicularsituationinourowntry。

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ArgumentsagainstpulsoryRetirementPolicy

Generallyspeaking，thoseemployeesroagfiftyyearsoldorovertendtothinkabouttheirretirementalthoughthisisapainfulexperieneofthem。ThegoodhatanewlawinNorthAmericamaybepassedthatelimihepulsesothatolderpeoplewishingtouewmaydoso。Althoughtheideatoeliminatepulsewillnotbewellreceivedbysomeese，especiallyyoungpeople，weshouldalsoadoptasimilarlawbeployeeshaverichworkexperienprodudhelptocreateamorepetitivejobmarket。

Somepeopleinsistthatyouadvaheircareersifoldpeoplefillthejobsatthetop。Theirideaisquiteuaherewillbeagreatlossifallpeopleobeythepulsepolicy。Ourtryisshortofoutstandingprofessors，seniineers，andallkies。Manyoldpeopleareprecioustaleheyhavealotofworkexperieforcedtoretire，theirwisdomwillhelptreaterwealthfora。Atryotaffordtolenumberofexperiencedpeoplewhostillservetheirtry。

uethatoldpeoplearephysicallyweak。Eveniftheyareabletouetowork，theydonothavehighworkefficy。Thisopinionisoutofdatealready。Iy，alotofequipmentistrolledbyputers，sopeopleplishtheirtasksbytheouse。Asaresult，workefficyisbasedonpeople'sfiherthanonmassmanuallabors。Sinceoldpeoplealsousetheirfiheworkeffiotbenecessarilyaffected。

Finally，oppohinkthatyoubeabletoworktotheirfullcapacityifoldpeoplestilloccupythepositions。Buttheyshouldalsoknowthatmanyyoungpeopleonlywanttomakemoremoheydon'twanttoworkhard。Oheyfiheywillmakeacareerge。Howtheyworktotheirfullcapacityiftheygetheirjobsfrequently?Inanyoldemployeesstickwiththeirjobsformorethanthirtyyears。Theydothejobsthatmanyyouwanttodo。Ifoldemployeesuetowork，theywillcreateamorepetitivesituationinthejobmarket。Whenyoungpeoplehavediffidingjobs，theywillcherishthejobstheyd。

Tosummarize，ifpeoplewastheywaswillouthedrawbaaisopesideworld。Ifweegoodideasfromabroadaopractice，futurerosperousa。Thus，asimilarlawshouldalsobemadeinourtry。

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Towriteawell-anizedargumentessay，youshouldfollowtheguidelinesbelow。

1。Afteryoufindatroversialtopic，thefirststepinplanningaolistthepointsyouwishtomake。Someofthemmaybefadsomeofthemmaybeopinions。Bothfadopinionsareusedinabecauseagargumentisonebasedonanopinionthatbesupportedbyevidencesuchasfacts，examples，andstatistics。Takethetroversialtopipulseforexample。Thisissueiswhetherornotpeopleshouldretireataage。Thepropohoseinfavorofthislaw）say“Yes”andmustpresenttheirsolidevides（thoseagainstthislaw）say“No”andmustalsogivetheirl。

2。Takeasideofatroversialtopientessay。Onceyouhavedeyourposition，allyumentsmustbedesigoceyourreaderofyourpersonalopinion。Ifyouonlylisttheadvantagesofahenlistthedisadva，youarenaessay。