Section Four The Concluding Paragraph(第3页)
1:Thememorablestatementprovidesasuggestion。
Itisobviousfromwhathasbeensaidthatmoststudentswhostudyiryfaeofthesesamedifficulties:laureshodlohereftostudyabroad,eatshouldhaveadequateexposuretonotonlythenewlaalsosomeoftheculturaldiffereweenhisowndthery。Mostimportaudentshouldbeassigfamilytohelpmakethetransitiontotheylelessdifficult。
2:Thememorablestatementoffersasolution。
Toclude,weseethatheproblemsiseasytosolve。Bee,westists'tdoproperresearch,soandourwork。Thelackofdatafromresearchresultsinourinabilitytodemonstrateetehegoversolutionistofirstchooseaparticularareaandworkontheproblemsthatexistthere。Afterwegatherthedataaheproblems,reseothegoveromakethemseehowimportantourresearlyinthiswaywegetfinanover,anduetodoourresearch。
3:Thememorablestatementmakesapredi。
Aswehaveseeomobilemanufacturersarerunningateainstfncarmakers,espeJapaesautomobilemakershavebeeslowabthesmall,fuel-effitcarsthepublicseemstowarendsshowmanynewAmerimodelsofsuchgofferedtothepublic。ItisreasohatsoonAmeriufacturerswillbepetingsuccessfullywithfncarmakers。
4:Thememorablestatementshoersonalopinion。
Inbrief,marriagepatternsandfamilystructurehavesignifitlygedlivisinSanFrancisco。ThesegesmayhaveorequiSanFraniies,butthesametrendsarefoundinmanymajorAmericities。Theyaretrendsthat,tosome,ihydiversityorfreedomofd,toserousweakeningofthefamily。
&heformofthememorablestatementyouusedependsupoypeofessay。WhileanessayabouttheadvaheImayendrediotheressayabouttheperfectloforaorywillprobablyendersonalestion。Ofessayalsoendwithabinationofanyoftheforms。Forexample:
5:Thememorablestatementhasapredi(thesetehethirdsentendasuggestiosentence)。
Inshort,aisadangerouspollutaedStates。Ifaisnotredusiderably,theAmerismaywitnessmoreseriousdamagetotheirehisdamagehasalreadythreatenedsomeofourvaluablenaturalresourdmaysomedaydisruptoureseriouslyenoughtoaffectourfoodsupply。Ohegoverionnowthedamagetotheebesloweddown。
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1)Donotjumpfromthesummarytothememorablestatement。Beginyourgparagraphwiththesummaryandtheowardthefihlyandnaturally。Thestructureofthegparagraphistheoppositefromtheintrraph:narro,graduallybroadinthemiddle,andverywideatthebottom。
2)Donotintroduewideainthegparagraphbecausethisistheendofyouressay。Ifyouhaveplannedyouressaycarefully,thisshouldnothappen。
3)Doitude。Sometimesawriterwhohasbeenethingthroughouthisessaytendstosoftenhisstance(姿态)oreveniesinhislastparagraph。Forexample,someoneplainingofthepoorqualityofaayabruptlycludewithastatemeheclasswasnotsobad,orheshouldhavestudiedharder,etc。。Thegemayseempolite,butitactuallyfusesthereaderwhohastakeer'scriticismseriously。
Practice4-4-3
Thefollowingessaydoesnothaveagparagraph。Readtheessayawopossiblegparagraphsthatfollow。Choosetheoyouthier,aoexplainyoursrovidedonlyassuggestions。
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Intoday'sworld,trieshavebeoreeiterdepebecauseatryoveforwardwithouthelpfromothertries。Sincedevelopingtriesareprovidingdevelopedtrieswithrawmaterials,labor,as,developedtriesalsohelpdevelopingtriesbyprovidingfinancialsuppeology,andtrainingtheirpeople。
Financialsupportisusuallythemostdirectassistaedbydevelopingtries。Onashort-termbasis,ritriesliftsomeeicallybackwardtriesoutofpovertybylaungpovertyalleviatios。Poortrieswillthennolongersufferfromlackoffood,housing,ormedialong-termbasis,however,developedtriesstimulateeicgrowthindevelopingtriesbymakis。Withlow-ierest-freeloansfromabroad,developingtriesstarttoimprovetheirinfrastructuresuchashighwaysandteleunis,andfiheprocessoftheirownindustrialization。
Mobuyprosperity;tstate-of-the-artfacilitiesintodevelopingtriesisaivemethodtohelpdevelopingtries。Duetoalowlevelofteanyfadevelopingtrieseithereexergyorcauseheavypollutioohelpthoseakefulluseoftheirnaturalresourdraisetheirworkefficy,developedtriesshh-tedustriestodevelopingtriesinsuchareasasmaery,eleiechemistry,andautoparts。Oheirlevelofteologyhasreachedthehigheststandardsdevelopingtriesbegihmoreadvariesiio。
Aesesayi'sbettertoteachapersonhowtofishratherthanjusttogivehimafish。”Thisi,inthelorainingisalsenttaskfordevelopingtries。Iimes,nothingismorevaluablethanhumanresourcesbecauseup-to-dateexpertiseedpeople。Tobemoreexact,withoutqualifiedmanagers,fnloansmaywisely;withoutskilledtes,importedequipmentejustapileofdumpedgarbage。Totrainpeoplefromdevelopingnations,developedtrieseitheriraiudyabroadorseeachoverseas。Byedualprograms,developedtrieswilleventuallyhelpdevelopingtrieshelpthemselves。
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So,therearethreemethodsfordevelopedtriestohelpdevelopingtries。Ofcourse,developedtriesalsoprovideaidbyestablishingsnownedpaniesindevelopingtries。However,developingtriesshouldmainlystandontheirowis,developingtriesotboosttheireywithouttheeffortsmadebythemselves。
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Practice4-4-4
ThefollowingessayisaboutWoodyAllen,afamousandfunnyAmeriwho,asyouwillsee,hashadmajobsiindustry。Thisessaydoesnothaveagparagraph。Readtheessayahreepossiblegparagraphsthatfollow。Choosetheoyouthi,aoexplainyouroansrovided。
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AmerieverbethesamewithoutWoodyAlleainlyAmerihumorwouldneverbe。AllenhasbeousastheNeaysfi-a-sideoflife。Hehasbeentig(胳肢)theAmeriy-boneforover25yearsundermaitles,suchasaerformer,andafilmdirector。
Earlyinhiscareer,Allehes。Hespentallhistimewritingjokesaherpeopletoperform。HeworkedforNBdtelevisionperformers。SomeoftheearlyTVshowsinthe1950's,suchasSiddGarryMoore,hadWoodyAllehem。Eventhoughheerformer,hewasgainingvaluableexperience。
Intheearly1960's,whilemaintaininghiswriting,Allenbecameaperformer。Atfirst,he(站在观众面前表演的)ediaosmallandlargeaudiendwaseveShow。Lateroingplaysandtheorinthem。OneofhismostfamousplayslayItAgain,Sam。Healsobeganafilms。Inmostofthese,hewasawriteraswellasanactor。