Section 2 Global Revisions（第1页）

Se2:GlobalRevisions

Manyinstruendthatintheirrevisiosworkfromthebiggesteleme。Thisis，onthewhole，goodadvicebecauseitmakestheactofrevisiohodical。

Globalrevisionsarerevisiorefiniructureandgtheshapeandreasoninginyourpaper。Befwithdetailsofstyleandlaingandpr），besurethatyouhavepresearedforceful。

Whenlookinggloballyatyourwork，pleasefocuspartithefolloects:

1。Makesurethestructureisapleteandlogie

&hingtolookatwheomakesurethatyouracademicpaperhasapletestructure，whichusuallyirodu，adisda。

Thenanalyzeyuments。Theproalysisinvdownanideaumentintoitspartsaisos。Whenyouanalyzeyouroer，then，ythatpaperdownintoitspartsandaskiherorssupportthepaperasyouenvisionit。Hereisachecklisttohelpyouanalyzeyumentaructure。

&hesissaywhatyouwantittosay?Doesitmakeapointworthg?

&hepaperdeliverwhatyourthesispromisestodeliver?

&lihepaperyou’vejustwrittehisoutliyouriions?

&inyouroutlielydeveloped?

&equallydeveloped?（Thatis，doesyourpaperseembalanced，overall?）

&relevaing?

·Haveyoureallypresenteda，orisyourpapermerelyaseriesofobservations，asummary?

·Doyouseeanyholesinyument?Ordoyoufig?

·Haveyousuppliedampleevidenents?

·Doyouseeanylogicalfallacies?

Activity2-1:Whatisthestructureofanacademicpaper?

&estructureofainghasalreadybee1。Doyoustillrememberwhataretheelemehefollowingkindsofacademig?

·Shortessays